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1. Using Images

Use metaphor and analogy to convey visual picture-images. Dreams are an example of visual images that convey both principles, concepts, and feelings. Don't be afraid to leave some word-pictures as incomplete and somewhat abstract. Sometimes you must allow the reader to "fill in the blanks." Don't over-analyze for the reader. Something that's worth reading asks the reader to do some work -- making their own conclusions and analysis.

2. Self-Disclosure

Watch out that in trying to be honest, you don't over-disclose. Sometimes giving too much personal detail is unseemly and doesn't fit the occasion, author, or audience. Yet sometimes nothing but sharing your intimate feelings works to convey the idea. Remind people to ask questions about their own behavior and actions. Avoid affectation.

3. Fear, Frustration, and Serenity

Don't be afraid to just write. Let the outcome be in God's hand. Focus on releasing the life of God in others. Work on yourself to have a calm, peaceful, gentle, and serene spirit. Guard against becoming too easily frustrated. Frustration happens when our desire to reach a particular goal seems blocked and it's time-sensitive. In other words, even if we accomplish the goal, it will mean nothing because it was done too late. Time always limits creative aspiration, process, and product. Never do we have the time to do everything we'd like or think we need. Time constraints work against developing and maintaining trust n God. He will allow us to achieve the goals that He wants, not necessarily what we want. We must believe that a good God has reasons for our present successes and failures.

Serenity is what enables the spiritual person to act with grace, gallantry, without pettiness, condescention, pompousness, or arrogance. This is not false pride but simply taking up the position and authority that God has granted you. Serenity comes from being under the anointing of God, without striving for anything, but taking up a mantle, given by Him, maintained and enlarged by Him, and simply walking it out. This is the commissioning stage of walking in a calling. Vision become calling followed by training and wilderness culminating in commissioning.

4. On Persuasion

You'll feel the constant push and pull of both needing and desiring to persuade. Yet vision birthed by the Spirit of God requires no persuasion to have its effect. It only requires presentation. God's Spirit commends the vision to the spirit of others.

"By manifestation of the truth commending ourselves to every man's conscience in the sight of God" (II Corinthians 4:2).

The conscience is in a person spirit. Is not the soul or human perception within the soul. Vision is received in the spirit through direct revelation that doesn't need the mind to be received. Human transfer of it in not the issue for if it is truly of God it bears the divine stamp that implants it upon one's spirit.

With God's help, strive to receive that single nugget of great value that's implanted in your spirit by God. Then, shape and give out that nugget to others. Allow Him to use your unique temperament, personality, intellect, and feelings. Demand that the process be totally spirit-directed, that is to pray about the approach before rather than after its taken. Balance this with the need to allow the words to spontanously flow. His direction is in real time -- moment-to-moment communication. Accept that a nugget is only a small part of a whole that you'llnever have of the privilege of knowing. Each reader forms their unique whole from the nugget you give them. Unless the nugget a spirit-breathed portion, it won't enter the reader's spirit to provide for the possibility of producing a whole. Let your words be like music that propels one into worship. Nuggets that activate a person's spirit are actually spirit themselves as soul cannot bring spirit.

Writing that evokes images that activate the soul -- here we're talking about emotions -- only can birth soul in another person. They can't truly birth spirit, unless the person realizes that their soul has been activated, reject the soul activation, and meditate from a spirit-standpoint, to see if there are any lessons.

Resist the desire to persuade, or trying to persuade by evoking soul, but write by the spirit and trust that God will do what He wants in the people who read.

5. On Specific Methods

Antithesis uses direct opposites, a contrast of ideas. Example: "to err is human; to forgive is divine." Paradox represents that situation of a statement that may be true, but seems to say two opposite things. As it stands, the statement contradicts fact or common sense, or itself, and yet suggests a truth or at least a half-truth. This can be a powerful representation of the coexistence of opposites or the fact that opposites together are healthy, necessary, and enhancing.

One can generate a verbal expression of paradox by beginning with a truth. Then consider whether its opposite is also true. The more specific the truth the better the potential paradox is. Also look for words that seem absolute, like truth, whose opposite is "lie." Consider whether, in fact, the word is relative. Here "truth" expressed relatively would be "truth as I see it or define it; the truth for me." A concept is relative, if in practice it doesn't hold. For example, all people feel they tell the truth, when, in fact, people lie all the time. Next, generate a paradoxical postulate: "All truth contains lies," "All lies contain some truth." Then, think about it, write about it, and pray about it.


Copyright 2001, Robert I. Winer, M.D.